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Artist's CommentsThank you all! CREDITS *mjranum-stock=LuneBleu-Stock,~night-fate-stock,~SheisprettyStock,~grace-stock,~Lady-Dementia-Stock **************************** |
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April 6
1.3 MB 119 KB 600×800 StatisticsCamera Data
SONY
DSC-H5 10/600 second F/3.2 6 mm 125 May 24, 2007, 7:18:14 PM |
Critiques
About the piece now, I love the vision and idea. The title says it all and is preparing you for something fresh, vivid and happy. Great job on the angle you worked on. Not the typical thing I see often. Excellent choice of stock too =]
I really like your choice of color for her hair, although some strands of hair should be a tiny bit more intense. They seem almost transparent in some parts.
You did a good job with the leaves too and i love the idea of them surrounding her in the middle of the sea. That's something very original. I would suggest to work some on adding some shadow from the leaves on her body, that would make it look more real. Also looking closely at her left thigh the water almost is merged [in] her leg. I'd work some more on that too. I see you did a great job with water on your "Mystica" piece so Im sure you won't have a problem with that =]
Overall, I love the image, makes me feel nice and since its a hot day I owe you for the freshness i got
You have Great potential and talent sweetheart, I have seen some gems in your gallery, keep it up, I sure wanna see more and more from you.
My first feeling when I saw the image was freedom, and a link between the nature and the girl. I think the concept and vision of the art is pretty good. Let see the technical part...
Technically, some things must be improved, like the harmony between the colors.
Lacked some emphasis on girl, the hair causes a little impact, but I think needs more.
Some details, like the hair over the leaves and water splats are with some imperfections, there is something that seems too "placed"...
My final words are: the picture needs more impact, and some more details, but you're on the right way.
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